Nothing Knew:
Today was like all other days, nothing knew
I try and try each day to find something to do
I even sit and listen to the cows moo while trying
to figure out something to do
so I can say that I did something knew
24 hours a day my life is very boring
while all of my friends lives are constantly soaring
I will do what I did today tomorrow
I will get the same results, nothing knew
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Was the word 'knew' misspelled on purpose? I kind of like that. That nothing's new, but nothing's known. I don't know if that makes sense.
ReplyDeleteI love the image of your life being boring compared to other people's lives. This is a very real feeling and I think it would be a good place to start a poem.
I actually didn't think this poem was that bad. The rhyming made it sound worse than it is but it is a good idea and I think you have a lot of stuff to start with for a good poem.
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