Friday, February 12, 2010

The Impulse

M - Nice day out ma'am
F - Yes sir sure is
M - Where you headed
F - Dover
M - Why you headed there?
F - Some family problems
M - How long you gonna be there?
F - As long as it takes
M - To do what?
F - Settle some family problems
M - What kind of family problems?
F - My father is being held hostage and they want 1 million before they release him
M - Oh, my, you don't hear that story everyday
F - Yeah
M - Is that whats in the suitcase?
F - what?
M- The money
F - Um . . .
M - Can I see it?
F - Um . . .
M - Please! I have never seen 1 million dollars before
F - I think not this money is for my father and I am not going to chance his life!
M - Come on! We are the only ones out here, what can happen?
F - Lots could happen! No way!
M - Your just being over careful!
F - I love my father and I this money is his life!
M - If you let me see it then I won't tell anybody theres money in that suitcase
F - Who you gonna tell we are the only 2 out here
M - I will tell people on the train, someone on the train will steal that money
F - You wouldn't!
M - Or would I?
F - Why do you want to see 1 million dollars?
M - Because I've never seen it before
F - Fine as long as no one else finds out on the train
M - Alright
F - You stand 10 feet back so I know you won't steal any
M - Fine. Hurry up here comes the train.

2 comments:

  1. I really like this. Very mysterious, it really opens up many different ideas in my head. Keep it up!

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  2. Does he take the money...? Thats what I want to know. Very creative. Good Work.

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